The wind

“So high I almost touch the sky/ Thank you, thank you/ Thank God for you, the wind beneath my wings” – Bette Midler

Have you heard of Kaladin Stormblessed

The slave who became the storm,  

defied the odds, and overcame  

everything thrown his way? 

One with the wind, nearing godhood,  

enduring death-dealing hardships  

to keep Bridge Four together, 

he’s riding the tempest in  

another world, while I sit in my  

office cubicle, punching numbers,  

the wind sweeping away boughs  

and leaves outside while I’m  

at my desk, a picture of my wife  

meaning nothing, the rhythms of 

romance and lovemaking now reduced 

to plodding cadences, the monotone,  

washing the world a skeletal white,  

and I, a walking cadaver,  

neither knowing Eden’s breeze nor 

Aeolus’ fury.  

For dVerse

Photo by Khamkéo Vilaysing on Unsplash



30 responses to “The wind”

  1. The contrast between fantasy and reality was exquisitely done. I’m not a fan of Brandon Sanderson but I’ve got to admit that the Stormlight series was quite good.

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    1. Thank you very much Tanmay! Brandon Sanderson has grown on me and has become one of my favourite authors. I’m not sure I’ll like his young adult stuff (I haven’t read it yet) but I love Mistborn and the Stormlight series. Another epic fantasy writer I like is Guy Gavriel Kay. A lot more adult in his themes and style than Sanderson, but very good.

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  2. I don’t know the Stormlight series, but I think we can all relate to that feeling of being bored and trapped in the mundane.

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    1. Yes we definitely can. It’s a horrible feeling. The Stormlight series is good escapism though. It helps you forget all the cares of the world and immerse yourself in an epic fantasy setting.

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    2. Sarah I commented on your post and almost every single dVerse post, but I think that all my comments are in spam. I hope they haven’t disappeared. WP is giving me a lot of problems lately.

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    1. Thank you so much David!

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  3. The three mouseketeers’ rescue attempt is thwarted by la belle dame sans mousy!

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  4. I think indifference is a sad state. It’s true depression…the lukewarm water referenced in Revelation that God spits out. Yes, I’d rather be hot or cold, than void of feeling. This resonates!

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    1. Yeah it definitely is Tricia. Losing feeling is a dangerous state. Bad for your mental health too. Thank you so much! I’m glad it resonated with you!

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  5. Love this. Very well done ❤

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    1. Thank you so much Sylvia ❤️

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    2. Sylvia, I commented on your post Tennyson, but the comment disappeared. I think it went to spam. All my comments are going there for some weird reason.

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      1. How odd… but at least this comment didn’t go to spam, since I can see it. Sorry the system is being funky, I hope it gets resolved soon! But thank you for the comment anyway 🙂

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      2. I think you may be able to retrieve my comment. It must be in the spam folder. My friend retrieved a comment I left on his blog which went there. Yeah I hope this gets resolved soon! I like commenting on people’s blogs and don’t like being treated as a bot by WP lol 😅

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      3. Thank you, I just learned some new things. I wasn’t aware of the spam folder, turns out there were actually a bunch of comments in there that were not spam, so thank you for letting me know! I’ll keep an eye on that going forward, and your comment should be up now 🙂

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  6. The epic compared with the ordinary. That dynamic makes each certainly stand out.
    Perhaps, what can make the ‘ordinary’ more legendary is the lens and modifying words we use respectively to see it and describe it.
    There’s a monologue that Morgan Freeman has as God in Bruce Almighty. He explains that miracles like the parting of the Red Sea are no greater than the teenager saying “no” to drugs and finishing school. Your piece brought that to mind. Skillfully crafted piece!

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    1. I love your perspective! True it’s all in the vantage point sometimes. Something ordinary can become epic if we look at it differently. I don’t remember that monologue because I watched that movie a very long time ago, but it’s very very true. A teenager saying no to drugs is just as powerful and miraculous as the parting of the Red Sea. Thank you so much Susan!

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      1. You’re most welcome, Nitin.

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      2. 😊❤ You’re welcome. Movie moments pop out of nowhere sometimes.

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  7. I enjoyed the unique parallels you made and how the poem builds in enjambment along the way…. which adds to the frustrated, tone/mood. That state of dullness can be debilitating…

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    1. True. Dullness or ennui can defeat a person. Thank you so much for your kind words Mish!

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  8. I have not read the series, Nitin, but the stark contrast is very compelling.

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    1. Thank you so much Punam! I commented on your post too. But most of my comments on dVerse blogs for this prompt went to the spam folder. If you check there you’ll find it.

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  9. I enjoyed the juxtaposition of fantasy and real world images.

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    1. Thank you so much Sean!

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  10. Wonderful. I especially love this line:

    “the rhythms of

    romance and lovemaking now reduced

    to plodding cadences”

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words Sunra!

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      1. You’re most welcome.

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