When all is said and done

When all is said and done where will I stand?  

With the degenerate or the enraptured holy throng?  

Will death’s door lead to Eden’s viridescent land?  

I’ve clasped the feeble coward’s hand,  

lost to distressing reverie and contemplating hard and long.  

When all is said and done where will I stand? 

I’ve known debauchery, lust and a simulacrum of the grand,  

pain, sorrow and affliction’s mournful gong.  

Will death’s door lead to Eden’s viridescent land? 

Cigarettes, wine and all things insipid, dead and bland,  

I consume without concern for right and wrong, 

when all is said and done where will I stand? 

I hope there’s still time to hear the seraphic band  

sing with their flaming tongues a soothing song,  

will death’s door lead to Eden’s viridescent land? 

Let stony gargoyles and uneven, blurry shapes disband! 

I’m broken, crumbling and I don’t know if I can stay strong, 

when all is said and done where will I stand? 

Will death’s door lead to Eden’s viridescent land?  

Photo by Huper by Joshua Earle on Unsplash



8 responses to “When all is said and done”

  1. spiritual enlightenment becomes, even harder today, when all we see, all around us in the world is, nothing but, hell…

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    1. Yeah that’s very true, my friend.

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  2. “When all is said and done, where will I stand” what a wonderful question, that even now I’m truly thinking about. Wonderful writing dear friend ❤️

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    1. Yeah I think a lot of us think about this Jennifer ❤️ I often do especially when I’m awake at night. Thank you so much my dear friend.

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      1. Yes, me too, especially then ❤

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  3. I have found one small breath, one word, on touch, and the fear of standing is lightened. The question can still loom above, but if I’ve made connection with my Creator, all is well within my soul…

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    1. Yeah. Very true. Yes, one small touch or breath can remove the fear. Those moments don’t occur as frequently as they used to, sadly. I’m often plagued with a lot of doubt though. Thank you for your kind comment.

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