
1
The old descriptions are
no longer with us
with their odes to
silver-brown cobbled paths
like rows of distorted
chiclets stained with nicotine.
We’ve spoken of dusk so many times
that the muses yawn
when the crickets chirp
as swatches of gossamer darkness
shove the rosy blooms.
2
In my longing to make it new,
I read the Surevian troubadours:
The bards who chanted
while the drums beat unsteadily,
I borrowed from the Dacunian
alphabet which flows diagonally
across the page, pictographs
that are direct expressions of
thought, a language that conveys
emotion perfectly, unlike the
ones we write in. I did courses
on the mating of Platypi —
The rhythms and motions,
giving me ideas to curve my lines
both literally and figuratively.
I read the philosophy of Chon,
a Nuruman prophet who
wrote in neologisms, claiming
the universe was chaotic and
not ordered.
3
Why must my lines have structure?
I must re-shape and restructure
4
After all everything is madness/ like a winged whale eating flies on a purple plain/ the aircraft with fifty thousand eyes and wheels, spinning like a carousel/ the Ferris wheel shaped like a square, swinging like a pendulum/ the weed that helps you time-travel and then become a potato/ the suppository that’s inhaled/
5
But I’ve realised that even madness
has structure, connecting tradition
to the new. I want to leave it at that
but other poets have already done that,
bringing back stoic poetry while
ridiculing romanticism,
portraying the artist in confined
spaces while alluding to order
and sequences.
6
These irregular structures don’t work
they are only not so well-done pork…
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7
Perhaps I should give up on words,
purge the first person
narrative because it’s too
personal, get rid of the second
person narrative because it sounds
like an attack, erase the third person
narrative because it’s mere storytelling,
destroy the collective ‘we’ because
it’s too inclusive, annihilate the ‘they’
because it’s exclusive.
8
3+3=9
There, I’ve made it new.
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